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Panzer III Ausf. J 99% finished
Florian_zehe
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Bayern, Germany
Joined: November 24, 2007
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Posted: Thursday, March 06, 2008 - 10:09 PM UTC
Hi everyone !

the Mark III is finshed know. I present the first images here, let me know what you think about !















Comments are welcome !

Regerads
KoOkiE
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West-Vlaaderen, Belgium
Joined: April 11, 2007
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Posted: Thursday, March 06, 2008 - 11:00 PM UTC
very nice weathering!
Grifter
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North Carolina, United States
Joined: November 17, 2002
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Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 - 01:14 AM UTC
Overall, I like it a lot. It's eyecatching, and you have some interesting details throughout. I especially like the shell hit at the front fender. Two spots that bug me are the bucket on the back fender seems to be floating like a balloon, like it's weightless, and some of the extra track on the front looks like it would fall off the first bump they ran over.
Those two small items aside, Bravo! A very nice model!
yankeearty
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Connecticut, United States
Joined: December 31, 2007
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Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 - 01:34 AM UTC
if that is "almost" done fat joe was anorexic! that is a great model good paint job and weathering. What paints do you use?
slodder
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North Carolina, United States
Joined: February 22, 2002
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Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 - 02:18 AM UTC
Really nice overall. My personal nitpick is that I don't like the way the bucket is hung on the light.
Golikell
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Noord-Holland, Netherlands
Joined: October 25, 2002
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Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 - 02:26 AM UTC
Looks trerrific... My suggestion is to do some dusting of the runnig gear: in the pictures, both the rubber tyres and the sprocket seem too shiny...
Calahan
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Kansas, United States
Joined: October 09, 2005
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Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 - 04:05 AM UTC
FlorianZ,

I agree with the last comment about the running gear. I would brush on some pastel dust or some MIG pigments to tone down the shine of the tires. I would also recommend the same thing for the tracks. I believe the process would actually help "unify" the whole bottom half of the tank.

These are only suggestions. FYI you did a great job on the paint work (and photography).

Paul
Plasticbattle
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Donegal, Ireland
Joined: May 14, 2002
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Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 - 04:23 AM UTC
Excellent Florian. Brilliant weathering and very realistic the way some items are thrown on the back in a happ-hazard way. Just the way I like weathering ... looks heavy and dirty, but not losing any of the detail .... accentuating them if anything!

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..... on the back fender seems to be floating like a balloon, like it's weightless....
....I don't like the way the bucket is hung on the light....


As the handle is also metal, it has no "give", so when hung like this, the bucket cannot move (or swing about). It may look odd, but is quite realistic in this respect. Unfortunately, its one of those time when artistic license would win, over reality.

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My suggestion is to do some dusting of the runnig gear: in the pictures, both the rubber tyres and the sprocket seem too shiny...


Maybe its going onto a scenic base or diorama, with snow and wet weather???? Then this effect will look more natural.
goldenpony
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Zimbabwe
Joined: July 03, 2007
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Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 - 06:00 AM UTC
I like it very much. Very nice weathering and attention to detail.

Thank you for sharing.

WeWillHold
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Wisconsin, United States
Joined: April 17, 2002
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Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 - 06:06 AM UTC
You've done a beautiful job here. This one is a "Wow" on my scale of apprecation. Congrats on a fine job.

Steve
sgtreef
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Oklahoma, United States
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Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 - 06:30 AM UTC
Came out great.
Nice finish Florian
Florian_zehe
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Bayern, Germany
Joined: November 24, 2007
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Posted: Saturday, March 08, 2008 - 12:17 AM UTC
thanks all for the nice comments ! Really pleased me ! I know the problem on the modell with the tracks. The fruil tracks look better and real than magic tracks. I biuld a little scene at the time and I update the last work on the mark III in few days. I applied snow and mud on the tracks and i hope nobody can see the difference
I hope a few Modelers even know what to write

I think the running gear is okay. The tank is used in a very cold climate. If the groundwork completed I put the last mud and dust effects not color differences emerge with groundwork and the tracks.

Regards to all out there !

Flo
sgtreef
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Posted: Saturday, March 08, 2008 - 12:43 AM UTC

Quoted Text

thanks all for the nice comments ! Really pleased me ! I know the problem on the modell with the tracks. The fruil tracks look better and real than magic tracks. I biuld a little scene at the time and I update the last work on the mark III in few days. I applied snow and mud on the tracks and i hope nobody can see the difference
I hope a few Modelers even know what to write

I think the running gear is okay. The tank is used in a very cold climate. If the groundwork completed I put the last mud and dust effects not color differences emerge with groundwork and the tracks.

Regards to all out there !

Flo



Not to say but the tracks are great the way they are.
I have edited my reply as who the heck can tell when it will be in a pile of Mud and snow..
Great job Florain
domingohm
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Santa Cruz de Tenerife, Spain / Espaņa
Joined: November 23, 2005
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Posted: Sunday, March 16, 2008 - 10:43 AM UTC
good model and good photos too, congrats.
orange_3D
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British Columbia, Canada
Joined: July 28, 2005
KitMaker: 602 posts
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Posted: Sunday, March 16, 2008 - 04:58 PM UTC
I like this one a lot. Great execution of weathering especially on the upper fenders. Beautiful color balance and excellent sense of scale on the weathering.
footsie
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England - North East, United Kingdom
Joined: May 13, 2007
KitMaker: 305 posts
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Posted: Sunday, March 16, 2008 - 05:02 PM UTC
very nice indeed i love the winter camo, and the mud makes a good contrast , but i wouldn't put any dust on it , you don't get much dust in winter !!!!! very nice work.
PanzerEd
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Northern Ireland, United Kingdom
Joined: January 14, 2006
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Posted: Friday, March 21, 2008 - 10:57 AM UTC
great looking kit. I like the stowage box on the rear deck. Where did you get it? Ive got a PzIIIG started and a PzIIIE waiting for the Blitzkrieg campaign.

there is something about these PzIII's that makes them special. Anyone else agree?

Des
footsie
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England - North East, United Kingdom
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Posted: Saturday, March 22, 2008 - 03:47 AM UTC
yep i agree , i think they do have a lot of character over a lot of other tanks. you can also do a lot more with them.
PanzerEd
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Northern Ireland, United Kingdom
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Posted: Saturday, March 22, 2008 - 07:35 AM UTC
The kind of Panzer you'd want to take home to meet the parents

Des
CaptainA
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Indiana, United States
Joined: May 14, 2007
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Posted: Tuesday, March 25, 2008 - 01:49 PM UTC
I think it came out real nice. That bucket does look like it is about to fall off though. Good job.
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