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Kubelwagon
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Posted: Sunday, February 01, 2009 - 07:19 AM UTC
Tamiya 1/35 kit. Went together nicely. I'm going to use this for my Karl diorama. Got it to stave off cabin fever while iced in for about a week. Any comments to improve this would be helpful.













Any help welcome. Sorry for the bad pics.
Richard
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Posted: Wednesday, February 04, 2009 - 04:42 PM UTC
Hi Richard,

Kubelwagen looks nice. Its a nice kit for a quickie build. One suggestion I might make is, on jeeps/Kubels/vehicles with wipers I often add the "windshield wiper" effect for weathering by using small semi-circles of cellophane tape to cover the areas "wiped" by the wiper blades, weather the windshield and then carefully remove the tape. You get a nice effect of the clean and dirty areas.
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Posted: Thursday, February 05, 2009 - 08:45 AM UTC

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Hi Richard,

Kubelwagen looks nice. Its a nice kit for a quickie build. One suggestion I might make is, on jeeps/Kubels/vehicles with wipers I often add the "windshield wiper" effect for weathering by using small semi-circles of cellophane tape to cover the areas "wiped" by the wiper blades, weather the windshield and then carefully remove the tape. You get a nice effect of the clean and dirty areas.



Hey Mark
Thanks alot for the comments. I may or may not try that. But I think the germans didn't have windshield fluid to wipe things clean like we do nowdays and Russian dust would build back so quick by driving everywhere. So I think all they'd do is wipe the drivers side clean. I wouldn't mind to be proven wrong. But I will keep that in mind as it sounds pretty easy. I may do that soon though when I'm bored.

Thanks for the help though I'll probably try that on my next vehicle with a windshield
Richard
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Posted: Thursday, February 05, 2009 - 09:35 AM UTC
nice kubel rich, the weathering looks spot on mate. Ant
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Posted: Thursday, February 05, 2009 - 11:13 AM UTC

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nice kubel rich, the weathering looks spot on mate. Ant



Thanks for the comment padawan. Any suggestions to make it better?
Richard
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Posted: Thursday, February 05, 2009 - 11:19 AM UTC
looking good!!!!
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Posted: Thursday, February 05, 2009 - 01:28 PM UTC

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looking good!!!!



Thanks Tmas!
Richard
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Posted: Thursday, February 05, 2009 - 04:22 PM UTC
the only thing i'd add Rich is some equipment, german mess tins water bottles perhaps an MP-40 on the back seat, possibly a map on the passengers seat... just to add a personal touch, it's upto you mate, other than that it looks brilliant.
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Posted: Thursday, February 05, 2009 - 10:11 PM UTC
Great build there Richard! Looks like it's seen a fair share of action, nice finish. Can't think of a better way to wait for the ice to melt either! (well okay, maybe a couple things a little better! HA!)

Thanks for sharing your work. Cheers -
Tim
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Posted: Friday, February 06, 2009 - 08:38 AM UTC

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the only thing i'd add Rich is some equipment, german mess tins water bottles perhaps an MP-40 on the back seat, possibly a map on the passengers seat... just to add a personal touch, it's upto you mate, other than that it looks brilliant.



Thanks for the suggestions padawan. I may add a map. I planned this to be more of a messengers vehicle, so it won't have much personal gear. Plus, I don't actually have much to put in there. I may scrounge a few things from the sprues of the Karl figure set.

Thanks for the tips, I'll see what I can do.

Richard
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Posted: Friday, February 06, 2009 - 08:39 AM UTC

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Great build there Richard! Looks like it's seen a fair share of action, nice finish. Can't think of a better way to wait for the ice to melt either! (well okay, maybe a couple things a little better! HA!)

Thanks for sharing your work. Cheers -
Tim



Thanks for the comments and concern of the ice. It's finally melting away!!! Hopefully the groundhog was wrong about another 6 weeks of winter...

Richard
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Posted: Friday, February 13, 2009 - 07:05 PM UTC
Looks great! I think you may be right with the windshield weathering. Water is a precious resource. Maybe a blending of both would be a possibility.

Nice!
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Posted: Friday, February 13, 2009 - 07:36 PM UTC

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Any comments to improve this would be helpful.


Hi Richard. Some comments that might be helpful ... not telling you what to do ... but oferring my view on weathering and your model.
The weathering is probably more natural than we care to admit but for a model it feels a bit overdone. Covering the whole model with a layer of dust of the same colour... while natural ... doesnt add quality to the model. The skill is showing a dusty vehicle ... usually confined to the lower regions .. but in a more controlled way. Because the pastels give a flat finish, the details on the model start to loose depth. Your dusting seems to be washed on ... leaving areas not so dusty .... again could be normal depending on conditions and route travelled ... but not appealing.
Contolling the washed on dust to horizontal details and in deeper crevices would give the dusty effect and keep the depth in the carīs details.
The two weak points of the kubel is the glossy tyre under the dust on the front panel and the foldable hood. A good way to do a tyre is to first add plenty of dust, especially into the crevices, and then go over this with black pigments on your finger. This will mix the dust and black on the outer surface, but leave the dust coloiur in the tyre tracks.
The folded hood has still some visible mould lines that have not been cleaned away properly, and the holding straps are really soft. You could have added some foil/plastic/tape straps over these with a simple buckle detail, and it would have lifted the detail level considerably. As already mentioned, adding some clutter and signs of life to the inside gived extra details that attract the viewer and bring the base kit up a notch.
Sorry for the rambles, but just sharing some thoughts that may be worth considering.

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Posted: Wednesday, February 18, 2009 - 08:39 AM UTC
Hi Tanker9

I'm sorry I couldn't have replied sooner. I've been busy to the point I can't even check any websites except for school. The compliments are very much appriciated.

Richard



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Posted: Wednesday, February 18, 2009 - 08:45 AM UTC

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Any comments to improve this would be helpful.


Hi Richard. Some comments that might be helpful ... not telling you what to do ... but oferring my view on weathering and your model.
The weathering is probably more natural than we care to admit but for a model it feels a bit overdone. Covering the whole model with a layer of dust of the same colour... while natural ... doesnt add quality to the model. The skill is showing a dusty vehicle ... usually confined to the lower regions .. but in a more controlled way. Because the pastels give a flat finish, the details on the model start to loose depth. Your dusting seems to be washed on ... leaving areas not so dusty .... again could be normal depending on conditions and route travelled ... but not appealing.
Contolling the washed on dust to horizontal details and in deeper crevices would give the dusty effect and keep the depth in the carīs details.
The two weak points of the kubel is the glossy tyre under the dust on the front panel and the foldable hood. A good way to do a tyre is to first add plenty of dust, especially into the crevices, and then go over this with black pigments on your finger. This will mix the dust and black on the outer surface, but leave the dust coloiur in the tyre tracks.
The folded hood has still some visible mould lines that have not been cleaned away properly, and the holding straps are really soft. You could have added some foil/plastic/tape straps over these with a simple buckle detail, and it would have lifted the detail level considerably. As already mentioned, adding some clutter and signs of life to the inside gived extra details that attract the viewer and bring the base kit up a notch.
Sorry for the rambles, but just sharing some thoughts that may be worth considering.




Hi Plasticbattle,
This is the most helpful and in depth thing I have ever recieved. I don't hope to offend others though . Is there any way to take the wash off and start again? Also, how can I make a simple buckle?

As for the clutter and signs of life, I don't really have anything to put in there. Maybe a few spare helmets from the Karl kit I have would work. But besides that, I don't have squat to put in there.

Thank alot though as I appriciate harsh criticism as it tells me what I must do.

Richard
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Posted: Wednesday, February 18, 2009 - 01:19 PM UTC
Hi Rich that's one "grimey" looking Kubel you've got there it looks superb well done mate
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Posted: Wednesday, February 18, 2009 - 01:37 PM UTC

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Hi Rich that's one "grimey" looking Kubel you've got there it looks superb well done mate



Thanks for the comment Eaglewatch, much appriciated
Richard
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Posted: Wednesday, February 18, 2009 - 05:49 PM UTC
Hi again Richard,

Its looking good, I agree with my fellows that a few extras in the back seat or stowage would be a nice touch. Even a messenger might carry a mess kit or some personal stowage. Even a MG tool kit or an extra Jerry can or two would be practical imo.

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