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JSU-152 Vignette
Lateral-G
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Posted: Monday, December 10, 2012 - 02:37 AM UTC
After almost a year it's finally at the 'done' stage.

Thanks for all the critiques and suggestions along the way.

Here's a quick snap of the finished scene. Let me know what you think.



If you want to see the along the way progress you can look here:

http://s76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/jbrundt/Armor/JSU-152/

Plasticbattle
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Posted: Monday, December 10, 2012 - 03:18 AM UTC
Overall, its a nice little dio. Personally, I would add more rubble on the house ... on the window sill, and the other architecural details. The paintwork could do with more weathering as well. It looks a bit too perfect apart from the bombed side.
Tojo72
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Posted: Monday, December 10, 2012 - 03:37 AM UTC
I have not done dio's.I think yours looks real good.The only suggestion I have is that the red brick road in between the piles of rubble looks a little to clean,the red really srands out in the pics.Perhaps a coating of dust to tone it down some.
Lateral-G
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Posted: Friday, January 04, 2013 - 07:49 AM UTC
Here's a better pic from a different angle

Joel_W
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Posted: Friday, January 04, 2013 - 10:57 AM UTC
Overall, a nicely done diorama. Frank's comments about the window and walls would really make a big difference. Both look just clean, especially after the building being blown up. Also Anthony's suggestion about the red bricks is an area you might want to take another look out.

Your tank weathering on the other hand is really quite good.

Joel
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