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Panzer three ausf. L
airwarrior
New Jersey, United States
Joined: November 21, 2002
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Posted: Friday, January 02, 2004 - 06:26 AM UTC
Ok time for some more german stuff! Hre is tamiyas Panzer three, built oob, it does have a metal barrel however, but it came with the kit. (now wishing I saved it for the AGE build)
airwarrior
New Jersey, United States
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Posted: Friday, January 02, 2004 - 06:27 AM UTC
TankCarl
Rhode Island, United States
Joined: May 10, 2002
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Posted: Friday, January 02, 2004 - 07:04 AM UTC
AW,
AW,
AW,
The inside surface of the TC"s hatches should be grey. Imagune being in an airplane,and looking down,and seeing that flash of white.Hmmm,tasty target.
Also the jack resting block on the fender near the cross on the right side should be some dark brown color,it was made of wood.The metal mounts on it could be the vehicle color.
I would recommend hull color for the section of the tow cables,directly behind the "loop".
And if you have some fine screen to put over the air intakes on either side of the engine deck.
And,add a wire from behind the vehicle width markers to the hull,and then forward to behind the headlights.
AW,
AW,
The inside surface of the TC"s hatches should be grey. Imagune being in an airplane,and looking down,and seeing that flash of white.Hmmm,tasty target.
Also the jack resting block on the fender near the cross on the right side should be some dark brown color,it was made of wood.The metal mounts on it could be the vehicle color.
I would recommend hull color for the section of the tow cables,directly behind the "loop".
And if you have some fine screen to put over the air intakes on either side of the engine deck.
And,add a wire from behind the vehicle width markers to the hull,and then forward to behind the headlights.
Davhowell
Tennessee, United States
Joined: March 10, 2003
KitMaker: 268 posts
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Joined: March 10, 2003
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Posted: Friday, January 02, 2004 - 02:51 PM UTC
Very Nice job AW Headphone cords seem a bit bright and thick may just be the picture.
great job!!!
great job!!!
SS-74
Vatican City
Joined: May 13, 2002
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Posted: Friday, January 02, 2004 - 02:53 PM UTC
Lordette AW,
Overall, very nice work. and again, the mud seems to bee throw a bit too high, and especially on the side fenders, they are somewhat too much inside of the fenders....The red cords for headphone looked a tad thick, but could as well be the picture.
Very good build!
Overall, very nice work. and again, the mud seems to bee throw a bit too high, and especially on the side fenders, they are somewhat too much inside of the fenders....The red cords for headphone looked a tad thick, but could as well be the picture.
Very good build!
airwarrior
New Jersey, United States
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Posted: Friday, January 02, 2004 - 04:58 PM UTC
yeah the pic messed up the wires a bit, the best pic is pic 3, and sorry for the double post, when I first put in all the pics, it only showed up with two, and when I tried to edit, it said error on page when I clicked the img button.
sgtreef
Oklahoma, United States
Joined: March 01, 2002
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Posted: Friday, January 02, 2004 - 11:37 PM UTC
Nice build General!
Only thing I would say is decal to clean but if you are like me I like clean Tanks.
Nice work!
Only thing I would say is decal to clean but if you are like me I like clean Tanks.
Nice work!
Major_Goose
Kikladhes, Greece / Ελλάδα
Joined: September 30, 2003
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Posted: Sunday, January 04, 2004 - 10:08 PM UTC
A nice build all around . I agree with whats said above and more about the mud. It seems to intense on the perimeter of the tank and suddenly it stops . If the tank had been in such wet mud that was splattered so much all around i bet it would have more than you show in the rest of the tank as you go from the sides to the turret. What i mean is that the mud effect should fade away more physically and not so rough as i can see. Another lil thing is the colour of the mud that seems too reddish but then maybe is the pictures that make it.