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1/72 Dragon Ferdinand
Wanze
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Metro Manila, Philippines
Joined: December 02, 2003
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Posted: Wednesday, September 08, 2004 - 02:15 PM UTC
Hi everyone,

The construction of this kit stopped for three months and I gathered enough inspiration to finish it two weeks ago. With the help of Sabot on the problematic tracks, I am now nearly finished. I wanted to post it in the Rivet review board to see if there are corrections or additons to be made.

The build was OOB but I just added some styrene grab handles on the engine grill.


Three months ago


A week ago

Below: At present








Hope to see your comments soon,
Wanze
DRAGONSLAIN
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Distrito Federal, Mexico
Joined: February 22, 2004
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Posted: Wednesday, September 08, 2004 - 11:51 PM UTC
Great!, were the tracks too long? they were way too long on my elefant and had to do some unrealistic sag to make them fit.
slodder
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Posted: Thursday, September 09, 2004 - 12:08 AM UTC
Looking nice.
I would add a bit more dark wash to the engine vents. I would also add a touch of black in side the muzzle break and maybe even some black weathering around the outside of the muzzle break.
I like the way you gave it a dull overtone after the camo went on.
LogansDad
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Joined: March 30, 2004
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Posted: Thursday, September 09, 2004 - 12:18 AM UTC
Beauty of a job. Hard to believe it's 1:72! Did you overpaint the hull # decals? I'm getting a wierd smudge effect in the last photos that looks like '124'...
Also looks like your right hand track is coming apart between the 3rd & 4th roadwheel, bottom picture.

O.K. now the real question- was meeting that TV show hostess :-)8 the real 'Inspiration' for finishing this piece?
Don't worry, your secret's safe with us! you lucky so-and-so...
RAF-Mad
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Oregon, United States
Joined: March 13, 2004
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Posted: Thursday, September 09, 2004 - 11:59 AM UTC
I can only hope my Elefant turns out as good. Nice build
Wanze
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Metro Manila, Philippines
Joined: December 02, 2003
KitMaker: 277 posts
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Posted: Monday, September 13, 2004 - 11:18 AM UTC
To everyone,

Your inputs and comments are greatly appreciated. Merci beaucoup!!

Dragonslain,

The vinyl tracks were long and I had to cut off three track lenghts for it to sag properly.

Hi Slodder,

The engine grills were quite deep and I thought it created enough shadow. However, I will add some more to bring out more detail. I'm trying to depict the tank before the opening of Kursk. Hence, I thought that I would not add some powder residue on the barrel.

Hi Logansdad,

Heh,heh,heh,.....She is lovely and I had such a crush on her since she became a news anchor on the network. :I Anyway, she is my muse for an on-going project.

I did not overpaint the vehcile numbers. I guess the resolution of the pics are too low to pick-up the details and some of them got blurred.

Thanks again for your comments,
Wanze
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