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German vignette in progress
ryally
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New South Wales, Australia
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Posted: Friday, December 15, 2006 - 06:34 AM UTC
Hi All

To many things on the go at once, none finished but more started.

. It will be weathered alot and a lot of junk and spent ammo will be around the place. The figures/faces and groundwork still have alot ot be done.








What do you guys think of this one so far?


Thanks
Ryally
TankTrap
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Posted: Friday, December 15, 2006 - 06:59 AM UTC
Its coming along nice i can see the potetial it has because lets face it its dam good already.
modelmaker9
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Posted: Friday, December 15, 2006 - 08:10 AM UTC
well it looks great so far!
Some suggesstions:
1. If the guy with the machine gun is actually firing it, then the second guy who is up against the wagon would probably not just be sitting there. Soluttion: Make the guy wounded = hiding while other guy defends or you could give him more cover than just a wooden wagon so he wont get shot.
Just my advice, the rest looks great good luck
Hohenstaufen
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Posted: Friday, December 15, 2006 - 01:44 PM UTC
Very nice. Looks to be well painted camo to me. As regards the wagon, it's made of steel rather than wood I believe, but the cover it provides would be illusory, rather like sheltering behind a car! However the poses look convincing to me, bear in mind a machine gun would be effective at ranges well out beyond return rifle fire.
modelmaker9
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Posted: Friday, December 15, 2006 - 08:22 PM UTC

Quoted Text

Very nice. Looks to be well painted camo to me. As regards the wagon, it's made of steel rather than wood I believe, but the cover it provides would be illusory, rather like sheltering behind a car! However the poses look convincing to me, bear in mind a machine gun would be effective at ranges well out beyond return rifle fire.



Good point about the wagon being steel and the machine gun long range, I would never have thought of that. Still might want to think of putting just a little bit of blood on him. Its your choice. The wall looks great, what is is made of??
ryally
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Posted: Saturday, December 16, 2006 - 05:05 AM UTC
Hi All

Thanks for the tips, I was kind of wanting to have the scene as if they were waiting for troops to come into a line of fire. The other soldier will have an MP 40 in his hand or and ammo drum for his mate with his empty MP 40 mags left on the ground not sure yet..

Thanks
Ryally
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