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coleyboy
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England - North West, United Kingdom
Joined: September 02, 2005
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Posted: Friday, March 16, 2007 - 09:16 PM UTC
my first atemps at modeling in 30 years and my first ever dioramas any help or comments welcome






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Tojo72
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North Carolina, United States
Joined: June 06, 2006
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Posted: Saturday, March 17, 2007 - 01:35 AM UTC
First of all I would like to say welcome to Armorama,and congrats on your first project in 30 years.I myself have never even tried a diorama,but yours looks good.As far as advice I would say that your tank looks glossy,perhaps tone it down with a matt finish,Also the lower hull,road wheels and tracks would look better with some weathering,especially for a diorama.But keep on building and I am sure the guys here will have some good advice for you.
tony55
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England - South West, United Kingdom
Joined: July 20, 2005
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Posted: Saturday, March 17, 2007 - 03:06 AM UTC
Welcome to the club
Pretty good after 30 years, well done.
They are a little shiny. Dullcoat would tone this down. Also some dirt or mud here and there would help. There are hints and tips on this site about how to do that. Nothing expensive or elaborate either.
If you have a look through the features section there is a load of stuff that is invaluable.
Happy modelling.

Tony
Cactus999
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Vilnius, Lithuania
Joined: November 06, 2006
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Posted: Saturday, March 17, 2007 - 03:37 PM UTC
One more thing i noticed, by the looks you accidently swaped front fenders on pz1, left one is where right one is supposed to be .
coleyboy
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Posted: Saturday, March 17, 2007 - 06:40 PM UTC
THANKS I NEVER EVEN NOTICED THE FENDER I WILL HAVE TO TAKE MORE CARE I WILL CHANGE THEM AROUND
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