Howdy
bazooka,
I'm really liking where your creation is heading. As we all know you are taking on a
very tough subject to portray in the 'static' form....but you seem to have gotten a pretty darn good handle on it so far, keep up the good work!
If you are looking for input, allow me to ask a question first.
What did you make this flame 'cloud' out of?...the reason I ask is; that if the obviously semi-liquid material you used for this came in clear, or translucent I would have used that instead and coloured accordingly.
.......just a thought.
Tread.