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Dioramas: Before Building
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need more input on first dio
ziggy1
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Texas, United States
Joined: July 21, 2005
KitMaker: 248 posts
Armorama: 231 posts
Posted: Saturday, October 20, 2007 - 05:28 AM UTC
hey boys,

posted my first dio a couple of months ago, but got very little feedback on it.....would like some good/bad critiques on it before i launch into another one!! Please click on my photos for pics.
thanks!
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cyberdemon
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Kronoberg, Sweden
Joined: February 21, 2007
KitMaker: 105 posts
Armorama: 102 posts
Posted: Saturday, October 20, 2007 - 05:56 AM UTC
hi ziggy! you have a nice loking diorama there. BUT (there´s always a but) if i would do anything to it, i would reduce the size to a third of what it is now, skip the Tiger and simply go with the truck and the Marder and only keep 4-5 figures. So my advice to you is to minimize the open areas you could always save the Tiger for another Vignette. but apart from this - as i sad - a very nice looking dio

regards
Thomas
perlossing
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Kristianstads, Sweden
Joined: July 08, 2007
KitMaker: 110 posts
Armorama: 94 posts
Posted: Saturday, October 20, 2007 - 08:56 AM UTC
Very good.
Agree with thomas about that it is too much that happens, it becomes little messy. It is easy to add more than necessary (I has the same problem) it is difficult to see the whole and details disappears.
Another thing is that the soldiers are fairly clean, while the vehicles are hugely dirty, can depend on the photos but perhaps a thing to intend on.
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