Morning David,
Nice choice of subject. Which make of kit is this?
Overall the kit looks really good, I like the colour you've achieved on the vehicle. Not an expert on this vehicle by any means but a few observations. The top two open hatches seem to be very thick, this may or may not be correct, but I'm thinking they could have done with being thinned down a bit??
I think you tarp looks pretty good for a first although the rope needs painted to blend in. Have you tried using paper tissue dipped in white glue it produces a good effect, not so smooth.
The wheels look to have a seem down the middle, again I don't know if this is correct but I'd have taken a file to them and worn them down a bit, also the colour should be more grey than black and Italy was a dusty, muddy place so you could add a bit more there if you had a mind too.
I like the choice of colours for the cans on the back, nice touch and it's great to see another Commonwealth vehicle.
These are just thoughts, a grand looking build with a good finish, thanks for sharing.
Al