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Dioramas: Buildings & Ruins
Ruined buildings and city scenes.
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lespauljames
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Posted: Tuesday, May 06, 2008 - 09:57 PM UTC
this is my first attempt at scratching a building of some sort. i know it isnt finished but im just looking for wallpaper to put on the walls before i attatch them.
by the way this is not a open interior it will be closed and you will onlt be able to see in through the windows thats why it is half a room and has not much detail inside. its for my 1946 tiger in the u.k dio


roudeleiw
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Posted: Tuesday, May 06, 2008 - 10:34 PM UTC
Hi Jimmy,

i think your first try is ok. I like your posters and writings on the board. The window and door is not bad also.
The scribing of the brick pattern could be more regular. Perhaps you can save it a bit by completely filling the vertical joints also.
Not clear to me is the missing building above the window and door. Is there nothing?
You should have done at least one row of bricks to simulate the continuing building.

Good effort!

Cheers
Claude

slodder
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Posted: Tuesday, May 06, 2008 - 10:39 PM UTC
It looks pretty cool overall, I like the shape.

It looks like the window has pulled away from the frames and the latice work too. Try to 'pull' them together a bit.

Here is a link to printable 'stuff'
PrintMinis
lespauljames
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Posted: Wednesday, May 07, 2008 - 02:24 AM UTC
[quote]. i know it isnt finished but im just looking for wallpaper to put on the walls before i attatch them.
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claude^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^(isnt finished)


Im wondering wether to make a ksecond floor or to make it a bungalow. im currently building the roof in any case.
roudeleiw
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Posted: Wednesday, May 07, 2008 - 06:02 AM UTC
Got it, it's not finished, but you will have a though job to properly mount anything on top of the window and doors in a second step. Better to do and think that out immediately.

Claude
lespauljames
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Posted: Wednesday, May 07, 2008 - 09:37 PM UTC
i see no problem with the irregular scribing!
i am slowly building upwards.
im not sure what buildings to use either sied
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