Hi,
the basic idea seems not bad.
(Why not simply post one of the best of the older pictures again, so that we don't need to jump around)
From what i can see ( with the sun in the picture) you need to wheater the wood poles from the barrage and give some more colour variation to the street , along with wahshes and later highlights.
The layout looks good to me but you need to work on your colours (and your photo skills :-) )
Cheers
Claude