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Dioramas: Vietnam
For Vietnam diorama subjects or techniques.
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fockewulf
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Daerah Istimewa Yogyakarta, Indonesia
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Posted: Friday, January 30, 2009 - 04:14 AM UTC
hi all
I just finished this vignette, it's my first attempt build vietnam era.
I used to build WW2.
any critics & comments are welcome






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Posted: Friday, January 30, 2009 - 04:21 AM UTC
Nice work, I like the figures!
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Posted: Friday, January 30, 2009 - 04:24 AM UTC
Chris,

I can't see too much detail of the figures - though from what I can see they look very good.

But your groundwork & vegetation are excellent. Did you use natural items? Share your secrets with us!

- Steve
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Posted: Friday, January 30, 2009 - 04:36 AM UTC
Well the vegetation is great I cannot recognize commercial items.
Can you tell us more about it ??
do you have some progess pics ???
Concerning the figures, better pics will be really welcome Chris, to judge your work.

I hope to see more of your work
Cheers
Seb
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Posted: Friday, January 30, 2009 - 04:41 AM UTC
Your diorama looks rather good actually

The camo looks superb, the only thing is pick out the detail in the faces and on some other features etc...

some more closer photos would be nice



fockewulf
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Daerah Istimewa Yogyakarta, Indonesia
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Posted: Friday, January 30, 2009 - 04:41 AM UTC

Quoted Text

Chris,

I can't see too much detail of the figures - though from what I can see they look very good.

But your groundwork & vegetation are excellent. Did you use natural items? Share your secrets with us!

- Steve



sure...I was confused when painting that figures, it's old DML kit, and lack of detail.
and I just didn't know how to paint tiger stripe camo.
I used mix of sintetic and natural items for groundwork.
I used woodland scenics amd busch products, for small tree on the left corner of photos
for groundwork i used grass root, and some stuff from kitchen.
vegetation on the right side, I used wild grass, and rattan
motorbreath23
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Posted: Friday, January 30, 2009 - 06:02 AM UTC
The darker shading is perfect for this dio. I think because of the weather and the high tree canopy, Vietnam stuff comes out looking much better with dark shading.

Great job!
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Posted: Friday, January 30, 2009 - 06:50 AM UTC
Hi
That's a very nice build.
Love the jungle.
The painting on the figure's is very nice.
beckz5
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Posted: Friday, January 30, 2009 - 10:09 AM UTC
Hi Chris - very nice. It may add some interest if you turned the last man so that he was guarding the rear. It would add an element of suspense and pull the eye back into the piece.....Just a thought. Great foliage, thats as real as it gets!!
fockewulf
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Daerah Istimewa Yogyakarta, Indonesia
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Posted: Saturday, January 31, 2009 - 05:05 AM UTC
thanks for all comments


Quoted Text

Hi Chris - very nice. It may add some interest if you turned the last man so that he was guarding the rear. It would add an element of suspense and pull the eye back into the piece.....Just a thought. Great foliage, thats as real as it gets!!



you're right that's very good idea.
When I built this I also thought that last figure in strange position because he looks to vegetation in the left side, but I didn't find a solution. thank you
Crossedrifles
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Posted: Saturday, January 31, 2009 - 07:28 AM UTC
As a figure guy, I want to start working on displaying them in a more interesting manner than simply on a wooden base. I love your groundwork. The vegetation is absolutely convincing.
Whew! Two posts in one day. Time for a beer.
youngc
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Posted: Saturday, January 31, 2009 - 12:35 PM UTC
Hi Chris, this looks great.

I am interested to know how you used rattan to make vegetation.

I don't like the red and blue pieces in bush on the left, can these be removed? The rest of the vegetation looks spot on for tropical scrubland.

I am impressed by the vine/creeper clump in the back right side, it looks like it is growing over a wall or some sort of abandoned temple.

Fantastic work mate.

Chas
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Posted: Saturday, January 31, 2009 - 12:57 PM UTC
really good work
fockewulf
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Daerah Istimewa Yogyakarta, Indonesia
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Posted: Sunday, February 01, 2009 - 07:52 PM UTC

Quoted Text

Hi Chris, this looks great.

I am interested to know how you used rattan to make vegetation.

I don't like the red and blue pieces in bush on the left, can these be removed? The rest of the vegetation looks spot on for tropical scrubland.

I am impressed by the vine/creeper clump in the back right side, it looks like it is growing over a wall or some sort of abandoned temple.

Fantastic work mate.

Chas



I used rattan only for vegetation which look like hay. I just painted it and drop a little white glue on base and attached the rattan, then left it to dry
My friend also told me that the red and blue pieces in a bush looks strange, it look like chilli tree
anyway thanks for your input, I wish I could do better next project
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