hey this my first dio ever as well as my first post on this web site i think its pretty good but tell me if you see anything i need to improve on (im sure there is alot) this is supposed to be a sniper hiding in the desert the guy in front of him is about to be shot by him i like it. thanks

hmm.. I tried to convert the link for pictures but not working.

Martyn

Hi Ethan
Weklcome to Armorama. Congratulations on finishing your first dio. I'm glad you like it and that you had fun doing it.

There are a few things you can improve on

The first is try to take better photos. It's very hard to make out what's going on since the photos are so dark and out of focus. Take them from further away and with better lighting.

It's difficult to show a sniper and his victim in the same dio since snipers usually kill from a long distance.

Take a look at the features section here on Armorama - there are a lot of tuorials on various elements of dioramas that will help improve your modelling. Best of luck.

Hey welcome to Armorama
Great looking dio
just some advice for the next one
1.Elevation
2.scene from a movie or pic
3.Terrian!!!!
k thx bi

Can't make head nor tail of this one

Sorry to say it, but from what I can see from the really bad pics, it doesn't look that good.

Ok. A few things.

First off, the pictures are not very good, and it's impossible to really access your work from them.
Secondly, your chosen title for the post is a little bit.. hmm.. exuberant I think.

To be honest, I can't see this going anywhere, other than downwards, which is why I'm closing it. Please take some better pictures, including some focused all over shots, and some focused close-ups, and repost them in a new thread. There are a lot of members here who can help you with advice, but you have to give them some decent pictures to work with.

Henk