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Please could the members viewing this review give me some feedback on the intro.
Darren, I think it's "just right" as Goldilocks said about the porridge.
If someone isn't interested in the topic, they can skip the Intro, as it's a separate section. And if they're interested, then they likely will want it LONGER! You were tackling a very specific piece of history, and handled it well IMO.