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Dioramas
Do you love dioramas & vignettes? We sure do.
First time dio
DougMauserFa
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Posted: Monday, July 21, 2003 - 01:16 PM UTC
This is my first attempt at making a dio. It's still in the finishing stages and still have a ways to go.
Just thought I'd share my first dio's progress.



Torque
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Posted: Monday, July 21, 2003 - 01:27 PM UTC
Sorry ,but I can't see the photos. Try uploading again.
Plasticbattle
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Posted: Monday, July 21, 2003 - 01:59 PM UTC
I dont think you can show direct from community webshots here(?).
Here are some links to the pictures
http://community.webshots.com/s/image2/8/11/15/82281115vMtIiK_ph.jpg
http://community.webshots.com/s/image6/8/11/99/82281199IeAqkF_ph.jpg
http://community.webshots.com/s/image6/8/12/38/82281238cJXYHH_ph.jpg

For a first dio Im impressed. Good action and the trenches are excellent. The tree is very realistic and the hedges are fine, but maybe need a little variation in colour (the ones with no flowers) throughout them, like some drybrushing of different greens. Same with the open grass areas and the mud in the trenches. Also some of the hedges seem to be on flat bases, like wargaming, which is quite noticeable. The bottom row of the sandbags are sitting proud on top of the ground, instead of being sunk in a bit. Easy to hide with some extra earth on each side. The wounded soldier and medic are in a very unbelievable place. They´d be better in the trench or have some better cover .... like a little wallsteads or bolders?
Sorry to be so heavy on your first post, but hopefully these little things might be helpful and are easy to fix, and would lift the model up to a higher level! All the best.


DougMauserFa
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Posted: Monday, July 21, 2003 - 02:36 PM UTC
Thanks for the critique and like I said I still had a ways to go, just showing what I had go done so far. The bush by the wounded soldier was just put on haven't finished it yet. The other bushes bases will be concealed with more turf and I'm going to put in some corn silk and smaller bushes for the open area.

Doug
panzerseba
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Posted: Monday, July 21, 2003 - 05:46 PM UTC
nice work
only one comment: the uniforms are a little bit too redish
lestweforget
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Posted: Monday, July 21, 2003 - 07:49 PM UTC
It says i am forbidden to view the page
waterboy
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Posted: Monday, July 21, 2003 - 08:42 PM UTC
IT also says that Iam forbidden to read this page.
Mar-74
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Posted: Tuesday, July 22, 2003 - 07:54 AM UTC
I agree with plastic battle, the wounded soldier and 1st aider do need some cover judging from your dio they would be completely exposed. A little point to note for the future - try and take the seams of the figures. You can do this with a sharpe blade and just shave them of or you can file them down.
But still an excellent effort - well done.
drewgimpy
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Posted: Wednesday, July 23, 2003 - 02:33 PM UTC
I would like to see it, but I get the forbidden message also. Any chance we could get the pictures posted here?
Plasticbattle
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Posted: Wednesday, July 23, 2003 - 02:38 PM UTC
Thats funny ..... those links worked perfectly when I made the links. Yahoo is a disater for sharing photographs! Armorama have their own section on MSN and it is easy to direct link the pictures here!
DougMauserFa
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Posted: Thursday, July 24, 2003 - 03:04 PM UTC
Here maybe this will work. Same Dio and still in the final stages. Still have some things I want to do yet but here it is so far.



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