Singapore / 新加坡
Joined: July 14, 2008
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Posted: Friday, February 12, 2010 - 07:09 PM UTC
England - South East, United Kingdom
Joined: December 17, 2008
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Posted: Friday, February 12, 2010 - 07:32 PM UTC
Nice very nice in deed,makes a welcome change to see things like this come together looking forward to further updates.
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Helmuths-stronghold ruin ( a Arnhem dio with no name yet)
Rhone, France
Joined: November 04, 2005
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Posted: Friday, February 12, 2010 - 09:07 PM UTC
Excellent story Kenneth, and outstanding planning for your new dio! The *ideal* would have to get a cat preparing to jump (with the tail high!) on the small pilars that's behind the drawing guy, this way the viewer wouldn't have to search for a cat that would stay unseen on some angle and too far from the guy.
But such a great idea, really Kenneth friend, you are one of a kind, very talented
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Donegal, Ireland
Joined: May 14, 2002
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Posted: Friday, February 12, 2010 - 10:21 PM UTC
Hi Kenneth. I love composition and the storyline. Masterful.
One nitpick I have is regarding the rucksack and the weight of the figure leaning on it ... it doesn´t portray the the sense of weight he has. Its also a little hard to imagine that the rucksack could support him alone.
As you have exhibited the skills, why not resculpt the ruck sack to lean against the pillar for support and show the weight of the figure on the opposite side? It would surely add to the realism of the scene.
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Dalarnas, Sweden
Joined: March 24, 2006
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Posted: Saturday, February 13, 2010 - 02:28 AM UTC
What a great, little scene!
Truly refreshing. I have to agree with Frank though. The rucksack does need some more attention.
I'd love to see this scene in colour!
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Florida, United States
Joined: May 04, 2008
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Posted: Saturday, February 13, 2010 - 02:41 AM UTC
Looks great........I like to see these different from the usual dios........Al
West-Vlaaderen, Belgium
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Posted: Saturday, February 13, 2010 - 10:29 PM UTC
Yo Kenneth,
Oh, Master at work here! Very nice scene and lovely story!!! How I love this little vignette...
Cant wait to see the painting steps...the lamp post, is this a MIG production?
Great work Kenneth!
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Luxembourg
Joined: January 19, 2004
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Posted: Saturday, February 13, 2010 - 10:41 PM UTC
Hi Kenneth
I like the scene also very much.
Jen Bernard has it right, do something with the cat, it should be more visible.
I am not a fan of the fine stuff (sand?) lying on the floor stones and on the border of the pilars.
What is that supposed to be?
Cheers
Claude
Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Monday, February 15, 2010 - 04:16 AM UTC
Hi Andrew
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Thanks for the encouragement
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! More updates soon. Cheers !
Kenneth
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Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Monday, February 15, 2010 - 04:21 AM UTC
Hi JBA, my friend
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Thank you very much for the encouragement and advice
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! I've taken steps to redo the cat and knapsack position and will post new pictures soon
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. Cheers !
Kenneth
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Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Monday, February 15, 2010 - 04:25 AM UTC
Hi Frank
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Thanks for the advice and critique; sometimes it takes an "outsider" to look for the missing link in a diorama
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! Much appreciated. Cheers !
Kenneth
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Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Monday, February 15, 2010 - 04:28 AM UTC
Hi Ron
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Thank you very much for the encouragement; updates pictures with the suggested improvements will be posted soon. Cheers !
Kenneth
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Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Monday, February 15, 2010 - 04:30 AM UTC
Hi Al
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Thank you very much; I'm glad you like it
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! Cheers !
Kenneth
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Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Monday, February 15, 2010 - 04:35 AM UTC
Hi Nico
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Thanks, my friend; I'm glad you like it
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! The lamp post is an original sculpt by my good friend Raymond O. Lantz, who very kindly gave me a set to use
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. Cheers !
Kenneth
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Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Monday, February 15, 2010 - 04:44 AM UTC
Hi Claude
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Thank you very much for the encouragement
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! I've taken JBA's and Frank's advice to heart and have modified the scene accordingly
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. As for the fine sand,etc., it is to provide texture to the cobbled street as the vignette is located in a long abandoned courtyard. The textured area under the courtyard represents the ground beneath the cobbles. Painting will "tie" all the various textures together
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. Hope this helps to clear things up a bit. Cheers !
Kenneth
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Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Saturday, February 20, 2010 - 08:48 PM UTC
Indre-et-Loire, France
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Posted: Sunday, February 21, 2010 - 04:26 AM UTC
Kenneth this is going to be a great diorama, I love the idea and the originality of it, all my congratulations
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Rhone, France
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Posted: Sunday, February 21, 2010 - 04:49 AM UTC
Much better like that Kenneth my friend! lovely cat "done of Tamiya spare parts" now that's really funny but you really did well!
"too much colour distracts the viewer"
Jacques Tati
Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Sunday, February 21, 2010 - 06:07 PM UTC
Hi Nicolas
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Thank you very much for the encouraging words; I'm really glad you like the concept
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. Cheers !
Kenneth
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Singapore / 新加坡
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Posted: Sunday, February 21, 2010 - 06:11 PM UTC
Hi JBA
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!!!! I'm glad that you see the humour in that (Tamiya "spare parts" cat)
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. Thank for the critique, though; I'm glad that I re-did the cat and am now very happy with the final arrangement of the vignette
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. Cheers !
Kenneth
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