I think I commented on the in progress shots. The bridge, landscape and tank look really good. The prisoner and his captor are very effective, too. :-) But, I liked it better without the two guys on the bridge.
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They imply more action than the guy taking the prisoner suggests. The guy right behind the tank is in an ackward position relative to the tank. If his right knee were down, he'd look more natural. This position tells me the tank is standing still, since there is no room between the tank and the wall for the guy and the angle he's kneeling at would be hard to achive if it were moving. The raised arm on the guy with the pistol looks like it's rotated too far back, like he just tore his shoulder out of the socket. It also looks like he's directing action to the rear, (right of the dio as you look at it) rather than in the direction of the tank.
If the guy kneeling is firing, the tank is not supporting him by aiming in the opposit direction.
I hope you take these comments in the spirit I'm offering them, which I mean to be helpful.