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KFMagee
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Posted: Thursday, September 25, 2003 - 06:03 PM UTC
"Passing Through... Europe '42"

It seems Eric S. and I had similar ideas about a "bridge crossing" (ie, his Desna Crossing)... with a lot of figures and a scratch-built bridge. Mine also features a windmill with scratchbuilt wooden mill ruin. My photos are the best, but here is the cover photo of my latest work, including a link to several albums in my ScaleMilitary.com forum on the MSN photo section... please take a look!

LINK = http://groups.msn.com/ScaleMilitaryPhotos/pictures


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Posted: Thursday, September 25, 2003 - 06:36 PM UTC
hm, loks nice so far, but unfortunatly the pics are very unsharp.

You set the jpeg-compression value much too high. maybe you can choose a lower one next time that the pics get much cleaner and sharper.

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Posted: Friday, September 26, 2003 - 12:17 AM UTC
Very nice Keith - you don't see to many 'early' dioramas. The overall composition is great. The overall tone of the colors blends this whole thing together really well.

This is huge Four Feet! I have to say - I'd rather see it in person. I think the feel of the different little 'story'.
Is the limber in March17 - is this scratch built?
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Posted: Friday, September 26, 2003 - 05:35 AM UTC
nice work
I like the big number of figures...expecially in a big dio
I saw also the others photos, nice also the water effect, and I notice a lot of particular
so congrats, well done
regards
AJLaFleche
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Posted: Friday, September 26, 2003 - 06:12 AM UTC
You've got some truly excellent elements here, nice layout, good, clear story, well painted figures, excellent brick work, nicely damaged mill, great looking bridge, natural looking landscape and the bark oon the tree is tremendous!. But I see a couple problems: The legs on your guys sitting on the walls are at awkward angles for their poses; your gallery says this is after a rain and the mud on the bridge and the water in the tracks support this well, but you have the guy with the viollin siting on what should be wet ground (which would make the rest of the day very uncomfortable, given he's wearing woolen trousers). Also, for the amount of water in the tracks, there should be some puddled water in the tops of the barrels.
KFMagee
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Posted: Friday, September 26, 2003 - 11:04 AM UTC

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but you have the guy with the viollin siting on what should be wet ground (which would make the rest of the day very uncomfortable, given he's wearing woolen trousers).

Also, for the amount of water in the tracks, there should be some puddled water in the tops of the barrels.



Two EXCELLENT points! One will be remedied immediately (water on barrels) while i will have to unpin the violin fellow and put a mat under his butt! Alas... the fellow holding the wine bottle on the far left end does have poorly positioned legs if he were sitting upright, but I felt it was "acceptible" if he were perhaps shifting around on the hard wooden surface.

This is what i really love about this place... people truly have an excellent eye for details that are often un-noticed until it is too late (like when the darn thing gets sold or put into a show!). THANKS AJ!
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Posted: Friday, September 26, 2003 - 11:38 AM UTC
Stunning keith! A nice busy dio that may lend more to the truth than most dios do. Great to see the lack of motorized German vehicles, as this was the case quite often!
The ruined windmill with the remains of the working shafts is incredible.. a great and individual touch. Things like this add to the realism of the scene. The landscaping is great also... the water and long grasses.
For me the only thing that may, or may not be right, is the spoked wheels with rubber tyres on the limber. It stands out as being too "modern" for all the other horse pulled carraiges! Im sure it could be easily enough explained though..... it would probably be easier to pull than wooden frame solid wheel! Another thing that you might want to take note of is the fallen fence. it is sitting a bit proud. A length of old fence like this would probably bend by its own weight and "contour" itself on the ground in under it.
These little nit-picks dont take anything away from an excellent dio. The large dio is making a comeback again. Thank God!
KFMagee
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Posted: Saturday, September 27, 2003 - 07:35 PM UTC

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... For me the only thing that may, or may not be right, is the spoked wheels with rubber tyres on the limber.



PB - the rims on the wooden wheels are actually gunmetal over black... they were steel rims. And of course, they are caked in mud, so they may look a little thicker in the photo than they do up close...


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... Another thing that you might want to take note of is the fallen fence. it is sitting a bit proud. A length of old fence like this would probably bend by its own weight and "contour" itself on the ground in under it.



The "fence" is my meager attempt at a "vane" from the actual windmill. Based on the photos I found online and in the research articles, I learned that the wind blades were usually constructed of wood, and then rigged with cloth to increase wind capture in slow wind, or partially / totally stripped if the wind was blowing strongly. I was wanting to include the frame of a wind blade to further increase the emphasis on the destroyed ruin ....

Still, your point about perhaps having some "bend" is not an unjust concept! - Look for the new photos I have posted (the originals were SO badly shot that I pulled them down, then redid them all with a different setting on my camera) and also look for a Feature Article that I submitted to Jim just the other day. The link in the original post will still bring you right to the new photos... you should find them of MUCH better viewing quality!


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Posted: Sunday, September 28, 2003 - 12:27 AM UTC
Excellent work as usual Keith.
One minor point though, any chance of a picture showing the full scene? It can difficult trying to work out where everything fits in.

HP
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Posted: Sunday, September 28, 2003 - 12:42 AM UTC
What a Difference a Photo can make. As I mentioned I would rather see this one in person really is echoed with the difference in the photos posted. Just the clarity and detail that now pops out is amazing. Goes to show you that in person is the best way to view things sometimes.
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Posted: Sunday, September 28, 2003 - 12:46 PM UTC
That looks really good. I like the idea. It is very well made! Keep it up!

~Chip :-)
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