Hi Gerry,
you are amazing...!! You turn out vignettes faster than we can write comments
This one shows a sound concept. Very clever to let them come out of a dense vegetation! Seals the view to the back, makes sense entirely!
Any big flaws...?? No, not really. The scene looks good.
One little thing just...the guys are just out...and the vegetation "has sprung back" already completely...and this is probably not possible! Some would have been trampled down, and I would have spread out some of the strands.
Would I have done certain things differently..like slight variations in the uniform colour, or one less motto banner f.ex...??
Totally irrelevant, as we are talking more "atmosphere" or "cosmetics" here, so you are the only judge!
Well done Sir!!
Cheers
Romain