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RMG Venom update
Venom
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Alessandria, Italy
Joined: July 28, 2003
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Posted: Wednesday, December 17, 2003 - 12:51 AM UTC
hi guy
this is my rmg dio
tell me what you think




slodder
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North Carolina, United States
Joined: February 22, 2002
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Posted: Wednesday, December 17, 2003 - 02:00 AM UTC
Wow, you've got some great progess going on this. I said it before, I'll say it again. I like the layout and composition very much.
I know its work in progress so ignore these if you already planned them.
The steps are to monotone and clean, I'd add some various brown and black/gray washes.
The ivey looks to monotone also, I'd dry brush some dark yellow on that.
The guy laying on his back needs to either be repositioned to support his suspended hand or you need to cut it off and reposition the hand laying back more.

I really like the bike, don't see them to often and I like it. Well done.
alpha-1-7-0
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England - South East, United Kingdom
Joined: April 18, 2003
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Posted: Wednesday, December 17, 2003 - 02:37 AM UTC
hey venom

cool diorama, love the layout and the subject. advice would be - blend the steps in with your walls - the steps look new compared to older looking walls. chips em up a bit - with some weathering theyll look perfectly at home. love the dead german - i agree with the hand issue, maybe turn it a little?
overall great stuff, love the water effect! cant wait to see the finished trhing!

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Venom
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Posted: Wednesday, December 17, 2003 - 11:43 AM UTC
thanks for the suggest guys!
when will be finish the RMG campaign?
cheers
slodder
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Posted: Wednesday, December 17, 2003 - 12:10 PM UTC
Hey Venom - RMG will conclude on March 31 04... Plenty of time.
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Kikladhes, Greece / Ελλάδα
Joined: September 30, 2003
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Posted: Wednesday, December 17, 2003 - 06:14 PM UTC
Nice work till now buddy. I agree about the guy down that should be in a more loose position concerning his hand and maybe his right foot, and for the steps that need to be weathered and chipped a lot since theyare next to the water which is the number one condition for destroying everything slowly .
Keep up the good work
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