Hello everybody,

Below my first diorama trial , a scene of ambush during last days in Berlin..

Thank you in advance for your comments!

rgds
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Very well done. Maybe a bit more building debris. If you check photos of German city streets during a seige or after a bombing, narrow streets are really blocked with rubble.

Nice dio! I like how you've got buildings across the street from each other — adds dimension to the scene.

Regarding the rubble, I must agree with Biggles2. The rubble in the street seems a bit spotty ... if that makes any sense.

The big thing ... Those building edges are very noticeable and really need your attention — could use some weathering as well: dust, mortar on brick edges, broken glass, etc.

—mike

Hi Umut,

Welcome to our great community !

Very nice job with your dio. Tank and figures look great. I like also the finishing of ruined buildings.

Agree with Mike: looking at the last picture, the edge of the ruined building should be finished better. Other than this, I think you made a great job.

Maybe you can post more pictures !

Cheers

Giovanni

Thank you Sir, yes you are right, the street is too much clean, need little bit more mess..

rgds

Grazie mille!!

Thank you for your constructive comments, next time hopefully will be better..