Hi Dave
Great stuff, I echo all the above comments – I really like your approach. It wouldn’t take much to dirty the vehicles and then a good dusting of brownish powder paint or pastel chalk to finish. With figures I usually give them a couple of dilute blackish washes and let them dry upside down, to get “shadows” on the upper side of creases and general grimeness (is that a word?) and it can help on hands/faces too – experiment. Those GI’s look like they’ve just come out a Laundromat.
Couple of other tips – check all 4 wheels are convincingly in contact with the ground (the desert truck), and backgrounds can be a problem depending on circumstance - check out Kurt’s Ardennes dio in this forum (“In the cold morning etc”) look what he did with a plain black towel. Amazing, creativity knows no bounds – a big pale blue one for example?
Interesting view of portraying the deceased; to me it’s a bit like believing John Wayne-era war films and westerns were how it really was. OK if that’s what you want, but if you are trying to show it how it was I think “taste” is a bizarre criterion.
The low view-point shots are always the most effective, with the bonus – as you’ve shown – that out-of-focus figures can look like they’re moving.
I too would like to see how Passing Through looks now, very well done!
Cheers, Tim