What do you think of my second dio. It is set after a shell has landed. The motorbiker is lost and getting directions, the radio man is radioing and the man with the shovel is digging his friend out out. (You can't see but there is a hand and a boot sticking out from under the soil). All opinions valued.

Plot wise, the guy digging doesn't work. If the guy is digging someone out who's supposed to still be alive, his mates should be helping. Are these old Italeri figures? Their detail falls short (not your work). The figures look glossy, but that might be the picture. Try for a bit more highlighting and shading. The oxygen/aceteline tank looks out of place as well.