this is my first diorama. it's far from finished but I'm well on my way. the right side is becoming a back garden and the left site supposed to be a deserted battlefield with a big crater in the middle and some barbed wire on the side. I have a little bit of experience with scenery building but i still have a lot to learn and I could use some tips on how to make the backgarden look realistic :-) other criticts and tips are welcome to
editor slodder I think this is where the first two images are?
http://www.modelbouw.4t.com/photo.html
Hosted by Darren Baker
my first diorama

supra

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Posted: Sunday, May 23, 2004 - 01:05 AM UTC

slodder

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Posted: Sunday, May 23, 2004 - 01:11 AM UTC
Bummer your image hosting site does not allow 'hot links' to it. I have edited the post to be URL's not 'hot links'
Good start, The crater looks a bit deep and a bit too steep, not much though. The barbed wire is nice, first timers sometimes leave off the barbs, you haven't - Nice job. I would drybrush some highlights on the wire and the posts (aluminum/steel on the wire and light brown/tan on the posts) This will make them more visually appealing and show depth too.
The wall on the right side stops suddenly, if the military had to remove some of it to build the trench then I would add some broken pieces at the end of it. Dont' forget the debris from the middle break too.
Good start, The crater looks a bit deep and a bit too steep, not much though. The barbed wire is nice, first timers sometimes leave off the barbs, you haven't - Nice job. I would drybrush some highlights on the wire and the posts (aluminum/steel on the wire and light brown/tan on the posts) This will make them more visually appealing and show depth too.
The wall on the right side stops suddenly, if the military had to remove some of it to build the trench then I would add some broken pieces at the end of it. Dont' forget the debris from the middle break too.

supra

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Posted: Sunday, May 23, 2004 - 01:12 AM UTC
owh... I see that I cant do that with my pics from freeservers... well I hope you understand it without the pics:P

janwillem

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Posted: Sunday, May 23, 2004 - 01:47 AM UTC

leuk om een provintie genoot te zien.

supra

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Posted: Sunday, May 23, 2004 - 03:10 AM UTC
hey thanx for the tips! The crater wasn't that steep but It melted away by paint (didn't coat that part):P I'll change it with some plaster. The barbed wire is already painted with brown and grey but it's a low quality picture.
And to janwillen I'm from Wildervank (Veendam) and you?
ps thats the good link! i'll ad some pictures of my previous scenery to.
And to janwillen I'm from Wildervank (Veendam) and you?
ps thats the good link! i'll ad some pictures of my previous scenery to.

janwillem

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Posted: Sunday, May 23, 2004 - 03:42 AM UTC
Groningen binnen stad, toch mooi om op zo'n internationale site iemand uit het hoge noorden tegen te komen

supra

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Posted: Monday, May 24, 2004 - 06:48 AM UTC
hey.. I've added some photo's. I've finished painting one part and I've added some bushes and barrels but I have no idea how to make small plants that will look good in my dio.....any suggestions???

medic23

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Posted: Monday, May 24, 2004 - 06:51 AM UTC
good job looks great.

janwillem

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Posted: Monday, May 24, 2004 - 07:26 AM UTC
if youre looking for smal trees you should look in model-trainstores(not so expensive) and if you want large trees you can make them youre self.
Check out roadkills site (yes again) for tips on how to
http://users.pandora.be/ronny.noben/website/intro.htm
good lick and keep it up
Check out roadkills site (yes again) for tips on how to
http://users.pandora.be/ronny.noben/website/intro.htm
good lick and keep it up


supra

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Posted: Wednesday, May 26, 2004 - 04:25 AM UTC
i've found a new site to upload an image... msn:P .. does anybody know where i can upload more images.. i can only upload one image here...


slodder

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Posted: Wednesday, May 26, 2004 - 05:11 AM UTC
You can upload photos right here at Armorama! Every registered member receives space in the gallery. Just click the Gallery button on the left and go to My Gallery (top left), then you'll see an Upload link (top right). Follow the bouncing ball and you'll have'em up there in a jiffy.

supra

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Posted: Saturday, June 12, 2004 - 06:29 AM UTC
well.. i've lost my inspirion on this one.. doesn't mind ill put it away and i have a great idea for another diorama ill work on this one later on :-)

meissen

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Posted: Saturday, June 12, 2004 - 06:53 AM UTC
looks like a good first diorama to me. the scene looks like it will turn out well. keep at it.

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Posted: Saturday, June 12, 2004 - 07:37 AM UTC




supra

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Posted: Sunday, June 13, 2004 - 12:18 AM UTC
dont think that i'm going to put a house on it.. just 2 walls and maybe a shed... but first i have to study for next week... 13 tests
i'm still going to school so... see ya next week
by the way i'm also working on a very nice waterfall diorama with real running water.. i've already tried the pump out and it works really well... i've sprayed everything black and the paint is now drying. i'll borrow a good digi cam from a friend next week to posts some good quality pics and i already have 1 question but i'll ask it when i have the pics online



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