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Dioramas: Buildings & Ruins
Ruined buildings and city scenes.
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Groundwork for vignette
geonewm
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Posted: Wednesday, September 01, 2004 - 12:55 AM UTC
Hi ALL,
I am creating groundwork for vignette I am working on
and would like to get feedback on it
thanks

AJLaFleche
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Posted: Wednesday, September 01, 2004 - 12:59 AM UTC
Looks good, well painted and a good amount of debris. However, you have 4 marble columns on one side of the doorway, their fallen counterparts from the other side seem to be missing.
Sensei
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Posted: Wednesday, September 01, 2004 - 01:17 AM UTC
I like it, it needs more weathering but i think it will turn out just fine!



cheers

Mirko
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Posted: Wednesday, September 01, 2004 - 01:43 AM UTC
Looking nice on the quantity of rubble. Yea - maybe there could be matching columns on the other side - just depends on if you had symetrical doors or not.
What caught my eye was how dark gray the edge of the broken part is. A fresh break would be a bit lighter in shade - not as much weathering and grime build up on it. The dirt is ok, just the tone, and I realize it may be the picture too.

Just some food for thought.
geonewm
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Posted: Wednesday, September 01, 2004 - 02:50 AM UTC
Thanks Guys,
Add some down and broken columns, more weathering , and lighter on broken concrete
Got it
Thanks for help, will show when done with the figures added
George
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