Ola Keith
Well your off on a good start here and the concept of the dio is very nice. The positioning of teh figures and the story they tell is very good and I like the way you showed that the Jeep was malfunctioning and that it was under repair. I also like your trees they look pretty convincing.
One thing I`m not so really impressed about is your snow. Especially on the trees. It looks a bit messy. Some branches have snow some don`t. And at the bottom of the tree the whole trunk is surrounded by snow. Wich even when it is a Blizzard will not happen. When is snows heavily usually only one side of the tree will gather a good layer of snow while the other side remains untouched. When the wind turns the snow will simply/melt fall off and then the other side of the tree will receive a good coat of snow. I found a couple of pics on the web to back my story up
Also when you look at the branches in your dio you`ll see that some of them are covered by snow and some aren`t, quite random. When it snows everything gets covered except the places the snow can`t reach (Underside of the branches) Again I found a couple of pics of this phenomenon:
Well as you see I took pictures of quite extreme cases of heavy snowfall (at least for Holland we never get so much snow) Also I noticed the Blobs of snow in the trees. Unless it is cold enough to freeze them in place they will fall down due to their own weight.
The snow on the jeep looks quite good though you migth wanna add more to the little nooks, crannies and corners such as the footboards and places that won`t be touched often during 1 ride. What I really miss from the medium you used for your snow is the cold appearance. The snow on the sides of the road looks too hard like it is frozen. It lacks the soft snow feeling in wich you dissapear with your complete foot.I took a pic from your gallery:
The snow would be more convincing if the guy standing there would be in about 8 to 10 cm snow if you get what I mean.
I like your wet road. Looks like the road already had some travel before the incident in your dio. It also seems if there is a crack running in your groundwork visible in the first pic at the right side.
Well besides my snowy critics I must say that the concept is really really good and the figures fit the scene. I`m no proffesional myself but this is what I noticed in your dio of wich I think could have changed with a little more work. When I made DISTRACTION I found out myself how hard it is to do snow convincingly and I have tested and experimented with many products and ways of doing snow. At that time I made it with babypowder but also the Busch snow was promising at that time. I hope you don`t take this too personal but I hope a little bit that you will take another snow technique for your Stalingrad Factory dio as it would be a loss to see such a building being downgraded by not so cool snow.
Sorry for my harsh Critics