Howdy andy007,
You've done a bang up job on your vignette. And your idea is a simple one, but has the potential of really 'reaching out' to the viewer with just a few wee additions......
Since you said..."....two pics of my
in progress little dio...", I will assume you still have a few thigs to do? Good, then just a few nits if you don't mind, observations if you will......
All of what I'm about to say is simply input, you can chew on it and swallow it, or just spit it out and move on...
Snow is almost never uniform in colour. You may think it is, but it isn't. Especially in an area where there is
any type of activity. Meaning
any activity....sun melting, foot traffic, melt runoff, vehicle movement, etc. You show mud in the hollow of what I assume is tyre tracks of a vehicle that has recently passed by. You are also showing foot traffic both inside the tracks and outside (a good thing).
But here's the suggestion. First, your vehicle tracks show no apparent
direction of travel......nor do your nicely done footprints. Even if vehicles were traveling in both directions there would still be some evidence....meaning, water splashing out in a V shape towards the vehicles direction of travel. Splaying outwards towards the way the vehicle went. Plus it would be a slightly different shade of colour.
Your bootmarks, or footprints would have the same evidence, but actually pointing in the
opposite direction!
When most people walk in the snow, they drag their feet.....especially overtired soldiers....there should be 'scuff' marks
preceding each footprint to some varying degree. It could even go in both directions (people walking both ways), but highly doubtful because of the Allied advance in that area. If there were indeed footprints pointing the other direction.....that SHOULD alarm the men walking the other way.
Also. Make sure when you create these 'tracks', both vehicular and human, that they travel
off both ends of your little square. Don't stop them at the end of your creation. Because it will
look like it ends. Build the tracks so that in your mind they just keep...on...going......
hth.
Tread.
Just a quick suggestion for some added realism.....toss something on the side of the road (the tree side) that might have been discarded by a soldier further up the ranks.....maybe a pack of Lucky Strikes or something.
Just a suggestion.