Howdy Gunny,
Very nice work. The best compliment is that it's 'small and effective'.
I would like to see some close ups of your figs...they also look pretty darn good. Also the breech, because that's where the judge's look.
Now, because either the CCC or the Rivet Review is not completely a place for 'atta boys', I assume you want some 'nit' input?
Since I always think in terms of a dio in the first place. When I'm building something I also try to consider all the wee details that raise an 'ordinary' diorama to the 'extra' ordinary category.
{a nod to the other 'Gunnie' for qouting him...

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You said...."....
The Gun and crew has hurriedly set up at the bottom of a drainage ditch, and part of the ditch is still wet from previous rains,...."
Fine, then maybe it's an illusion of the photo but I see no indication of either standing water, or recent water. Also, considering this is happening in the forests of Europe somewhere, there should definitely be evidence of that 'mud' the area was famous for.
Also, you said the gun was setup in a hurry. There should be some drag marks for the ammo box, and a tad more evidence of footprint, and PAK tyre marks visible.
I say all this just to add to the
already superb job you've done.
Tread.