Hi Guys:
At last I made the correctios that some of you sugested. The first pics of this Dio were posted in June 2004.
Here is the original link so you could compare with the actual pics and see the old ones and the coments.
http://armorama.com/forums/31233&page=1
Here are the new pics:
Coments will be appreciated.
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csch
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Posted: Sunday, March 13, 2005 - 01:15 PM UTC
jackhammer81
Nebraska, United States
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Posted: Sunday, March 13, 2005 - 01:34 PM UTC
Carlos, You have done a great job! The only thing I would change is to tone down the blonde hair a bit on the one figure. Again great work here. Cheers Kevin
Angela
Visayas, Philippines
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Posted: Sunday, March 13, 2005 - 04:11 PM UTC
That's a nice diorama. I like the simplicity and the composition. I like the way the building is damaged...with bullet holes.
A couple of things though...
1) On the last picture, it seems that the tarp is glued to the hull of the sdkfz. It doesn't look like it was hanged.
2) The guy with the blond hair is not holding his machine gun properly. It looks kike the gun is glued on his hands. The gun's postion is also akward and unnatural.
3) Yo can add straps to the guns by using lead foil.
Other than those minor flaws, it's a great, simple dio. I like it very much.
Angela
A couple of things though...
1) On the last picture, it seems that the tarp is glued to the hull of the sdkfz. It doesn't look like it was hanged.
2) The guy with the blond hair is not holding his machine gun properly. It looks kike the gun is glued on his hands. The gun's postion is also akward and unnatural.
3) Yo can add straps to the guns by using lead foil.
Other than those minor flaws, it's a great, simple dio. I like it very much.
Angela
csch
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Posted: Monday, March 14, 2005 - 08:19 AM UTC
Thanks for the coments. I´took notice.
Elad
Tel Aviv-Yafo, Israel
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Posted: Monday, March 14, 2005 - 08:49 AM UTC
very nice dio, I like it very much.
aside from the straps for the tarps and the weapons I'd personally change the head of the blond bare headed guy. his facial features resemble those gargoyles on european cathadrels.
I'll also add some more rubble to the middle of the street because it seems the rubble only gathered close to the wall.
3442
Quebec, Canada
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Posted: Monday, March 14, 2005 - 01:46 PM UTC
like said before by angela: the mp44 isnt held right, looks like hes holding a paintball gun... the mp44 are heavy and its hightly irelistic to have it that way... and the guns straps with aluminum foil add a nice detail and htere easy to make, even i managed it :-)
otherwise very nice halftrack and figures.. the base is neat also
Frank
otherwise very nice halftrack and figures.. the base is neat also
Frank