I, too, like the bottom one. My two questions are: what it would look like without the glare on the side of the aircraft? Being the pyro-self that I am, it kind of looks like the 747 is being hit. Also, maybe add a small black outline over the text to make it stand out. Other than that, your rendering is shear mind-blowing.
Robert, yours too are also top of the line. Like Paul's, I also wonder if the Early Armor text could be brought out any? Maybe a feather box? I just feel that, given the background, colors, the black and white text blends in too well. Blurring the background behind the text should bring the text out. I especially love your early aircraft banner and the way each image blends into the next. It is perfect.
Finals is this week, so don't expect much this week (maybe Friday after I'm done) but I should get some out next week.
Jeff