Here are some pictures of my finished Ardennes Offensive entry based on the 26th Volksgrenadier drawing that I posted in my in progress thread. Soory for the picture quality, they were a bit dark, so I had to brighten them up some.
As always, questions or comments are welcome. Now on to the Tank Destroyers Campaign.
Keith
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Ardennes Offensive Entry Finished
kbm
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Posted: Tuesday, May 03, 2005 - 08:38 AM UTC
Posted: Tuesday, May 03, 2005 - 08:48 AM UTC
Looks good Keith, you've actually finished your entry, whereas mine is still waiting for the wheels and tracks...
I think that as there is snow on the barrel, you might want to add just a touch of snow to the rest of the PaK, and the wheels.
That snow on the bank looks great, what did you use for the snow?
Cheers
Henk
I think that as there is snow on the barrel, you might want to add just a touch of snow to the rest of the PaK, and the wheels.
That snow on the bank looks great, what did you use for the snow?
Cheers
Henk
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Posted: Tuesday, May 03, 2005 - 01:41 PM UTC
That is a wicked looking AT gun there, kbm.
It's nicely done. The only two comments I have are:
1) There is a lot of sparse open space. Maybe you can add some shrubs and other discarded equipment.
2) While the AT gun had snow on the barrel, the crew doesn't have any on thier greatcoats. Maybe you can add a little pastel snow on their greatcoats.
Those are just very minor and personal observations. The dio is beautiful as it is. Superb work!
Angela
It's nicely done. The only two comments I have are:
1) There is a lot of sparse open space. Maybe you can add some shrubs and other discarded equipment.
2) While the AT gun had snow on the barrel, the crew doesn't have any on thier greatcoats. Maybe you can add a little pastel snow on their greatcoats.
Those are just very minor and personal observations. The dio is beautiful as it is. Superb work!
Angela
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Posted: Tuesday, May 03, 2005 - 02:52 PM UTC
Keith, Great job. I really like the whole scene. What did you use for your snow? One thing..and they may be there...but footprints in the snow would look really great...If they are there..sorry..just cant see them with the way the lighting is...
Great Job..
Mary (++)
Great Job..
Mary (++)
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Posted: Wednesday, May 04, 2005 - 02:38 AM UTC
Keith I think you did a fantastic job on this one. You definitely did the sketch justice. Congrats on a fine build. Cheers Kevin
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Posted: Wednesday, May 04, 2005 - 02:50 AM UTC
Thanks for the comments all. In response to the questions/suggestions. The snow is from Woodland Scenics sprinkled over the base and then sprayed with pump hairspray. There is a bit of snow on the PAK's trails and the bottom of the greatcoats. Finally, there are numerous footprints around the base and a tire trail for the PAK, but they are not visible in my wonderful pictures.
Keith
Keith
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Posted: Wednesday, May 04, 2005 - 03:21 AM UTC
I love the way everything is set out, it definitely shows of the PAK. The snow is great although I also think you could add some shrubs or debris to fill the open space, otherwise well done.
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Posted: Wednesday, May 04, 2005 - 03:29 AM UTC
I like it. the empty feeling fits prefectly with the mood. Which figures are those?
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Posted: Wednesday, May 04, 2005 - 03:35 AM UTC
I would think there there would be a lot of foot prints and/or exposed mud where the crew is firing the gun just like you have near the where that recoil spade is at the end of the tow arm. I doubt the crew would be standing in place waiting for the enemy. Even if they just set up, all that activity would have foot prints
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Posted: Wednesday, May 04, 2005 - 04:11 AM UTC
Excellent, Looks cold Cold COLD. Great job on the snow
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Posted: Wednesday, May 04, 2005 - 01:53 PM UTC
Great job. The gun looks great and the snowfall looks amazing the way you have it on the ground and foliage. Nice barbed wire too. Nice touch.
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Posted: Monday, May 09, 2005 - 07:00 AM UTC
Looks great. The only things I can offer are:
1. I agree with Angela, you could use some extra foliage or something around the gun.
2. You might want to add some stuck snow on the tires and wheel of the gun.
Other than that it looks great!
1. I agree with Angela, you could use some extra foliage or something around the gun.
2. You might want to add some stuck snow on the tires and wheel of the gun.
Other than that it looks great!
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Posted: Monday, May 09, 2005 - 07:18 AM UTC
Hi Monte:
Thanks for the comments. However, the lack of vegetation around the gun is that I based the diorama on a drawing done by a 26th Volksgrenadier Div. soldier during the Battle of the Bulge:
Keith
Thanks for the comments. However, the lack of vegetation around the gun is that I based the diorama on a drawing done by a 26th Volksgrenadier Div. soldier during the Battle of the Bulge:
Keith
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Posted: Monday, May 09, 2005 - 02:39 PM UTC
Not a problem. I didn't realise that you had your setting next to a road embankment.
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Posted: Monday, May 09, 2005 - 04:17 PM UTC
Good looking dio keith..
excellent subject and congrats on the job well done.
excellent subject and congrats on the job well done.
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Posted: Friday, May 27, 2005 - 03:50 AM UTC
I will not move my troops there... scary