Hi Mondo, you've made a pretty reasonable job of assembling this this kit. I would like to point out a few things where improvement is possible for the future.
There appears to be a lot of shine on the figures, perhaps it's just the lights that were used, but a good flat finish would be better.
You can still see the mould lines on the tyres, a couple of minutes with a fine file or wet&dry paper would have got rid of these.
The actual colour of wartime vehicles was 'Light Stone', a hard colour to describe but actually a 'pale buff colour with just a hint of pink'. The brighter pink was used on the famous 'Pink Panther' Land Rovers in the 1960s & 1970s.
Don't take my criticisms too harshly, I'm still learning myself after 42 years in the hobby!