how did you get the effects on the skirts? as henk mentioned, its a bit overdone. Im guessing you used a flame to shape them out? And ass for hte paintjob, do you notice on your third picture seems to gloss out more than the others. iam guessing soemthign whent wrong with that part, or its the the camera view?
on The second picture there seems to be bullet marks, they dont look very natural, theres no way anything with cut throught metal natural in that way, maybe putty the holes before re-painting? if i could suggest: use a needle that you'd heat up jsut a little and stab it a tiny bit in hte plastic, then use that hole ot carve around it to get a nice effect, then you can always drybrush around.
you shoudl realy try to strip hte paint off. i used soem brake cleaner to strip soem figures the other day and it works pretty well if you let the figure soak in a little. It only affects the glue a little if the parts arnt glued well.
you can always give it a try, the campaign is far from over

hopefulyl i was more helpfull than critical lol
Frank