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Sd. Kfz. 250/3 Greiff
HILBERT
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Posted: Sunday, August 14, 2005 - 07:55 AM UTC
Hi,

This is the first time I placed a few pics of my work in The Critics Corner.
So If I do something wrong please correct me.
This is the Revell 1/35 Sd. Kfz. 250/3 Greiff. It is a rebox from the dragon kit.
This kit is (really, not with a small alteration) OOB.
I let the diorama very simple becouse I thought 2 things, 1 the dio is small so I thought only the vehicle would be enough, 2 I have not the space for thing like bushes and stuff.
I thought it would attract peopleŽs attention as I placed the dio in an angle.
I took a photoframe with a stand (see pic 5).
I placed it here becouse this is my latest model and I want to improve my modelling skills. And you all can give me those improvements!!

IŽm happy with all comments, questions, and tips.
I will give my opinions about the models too.

Hope youŽll like it!

Ps the pics are a little small, I hope you can see it.

Bye, Hilbert













HILBERT
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Posted: Sunday, August 14, 2005 - 09:04 PM UTC
No one I can hardly believ this is such a good model....
Teacher
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Posted: Sunday, August 14, 2005 - 09:26 PM UTC
Hilbert, I think the problem is the tiny pics. It's difficult to comment because it's difficult to see properly. What I can see looks good though. I though the 'Grief' or 'Griffin' was Rommel's personal vehicle, so this isn't, and it doesn't have the appropriate markings to be that vehicle. Nice build though.

Vinnie
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Posted: Sunday, August 14, 2005 - 09:30 PM UTC
It looks a nice build from what can be seen. Only (minor) criticism I would have is that although the half-track sits nicely 'in' the sand the rock looks as if it's on top of the sand, should be slightly more set into the ground in my opinion
HILBERT
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Posted: Sunday, August 14, 2005 - 09:45 PM UTC
Are these better??











Henk
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Posted: Sunday, August 14, 2005 - 10:01 PM UTC
Looks good Hilbert, but Vinnie is right, if this is supposed to be Rommel's Greif, the name has to be on the side in large letters. Did Revell not add them? I have the Tamiya decal set for the Greif which I don't need, If you want them, drop us a pm.

Groeten
Henk
HILBERT
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Posted: Sunday, August 14, 2005 - 10:11 PM UTC
They broke And the bend of it is not that good.

But I can always try.
Check your PM.

jackhammer81
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Posted: Thursday, August 18, 2005 - 07:09 PM UTC
Hilbert, This is a fine looking model and base. I agree with the others comments though and have to add that I would love to see a figure or two gracing this model. It would be a wonderful addition. Cheers Kevin
HILBERT
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Posted: Thursday, August 18, 2005 - 08:14 PM UTC
I would a little too much.. I think.
The dio isn't that big. The dio is just large enough for the vehicle.

But another nice thing is, the dio stands in an angle, that's something new

I just recieved the decals from henk, so I will add them

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