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Cecina diorama taking shape.
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HONEYCUT
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Victoria, Australia
Joined: May 07, 2003
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Posted: Sunday, August 06, 2006 - 08:27 AM UTC
Gday Bob
This is shaping up nicely! Love the last pic looking down the M4A1s guntube...
The building automatically gives you the Mediterranean feel...
What did you use for the roof tiles? Hard to scale them from the pics, but are they maybe a little oversize? Not certain... Where is all the hemp going to go? Behind the fence, or in the front along the street edge?
Cheers
Brad
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Luxembourg
Joined: January 19, 2004
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Posted: Monday, August 07, 2006 - 02:41 PM UTC
Hallo Bob

I looked back at your other threads regarding the building. You did an excellent job for your first scratched building. But i have still some remarks.

Isn't there any sort of boardwalk or sidewalk here ? Is the road going right to the walls of the house ? You made a step in front of the door, so it is certainly not reaching directly in the road ?
This step looks a bit to large for my taste. Compared to the height of the bicycle wheel the scale is not right. The overall surface of it is too big also. Maybe it would be possible to do two steps leading to the front door.

You can also ad a light on the wall or a sign to break the big white surface.

The fence is very long, there is a lot of empty space to fill, so what do you intend to add around it, on the street and behind ? I know the story you want to tell, but the space has to be filled a bit . What about a destroyed civilian vehicle or a jeep, kübelwagen or something like that.

Cheers

Claude
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