Gday Gregorz
Want to echo the positive comments of others...
Want to start with the positives~ For an entirely scratchbuilt project, this is tremendous! Well painted and weathered, very natural looking... The grass, tree and bench contrast the destruction well, and show what a direct hit can do to an upper level of a building... The edge of the damaged plaster where brickwork is exposed is quite effective with the white edging between the painted finish and the terracotta brick colour... The street lamp is great and to have a working light is fantastic! Any chance of a 'night' shot with the lamp glowing? Could I suggest a street plaque, either on the building edge or on the ground?
Now some negatives~ The critique of the large chunks of brickwork... At the very least, you could show a crack running through the centre of the piece where impact was made, and maybe have one section a fraction lower where separated... Also a scattering of individual bricks around the pavement would help... You may notice that the two large chunks of brickwork, the door and a window all are falling the same direction. Maybe some variety? The broken panes are too consisitent. Maybe remove the glass shards from a couple of panes entirely?
Great job, and I hope it inspires you to many more!!
Cheers
Brad