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Hello Matt,
I like your build so far as I think that the Hummel is a very interesting piece of metal. But there are two things I want to mention.
1. In my eyes the two big grey blotches of chipped paint are very large/oversized and I doubt, that the paint continues chipping away over the borders of different panels like the right one. I think chipping each panel for itself is more realistic.
2. I feel that the scratches in the rubber of the roadwheels are very, very large and deep. Im absolutely not sure, if these would have been still held in place if 1/5th of them was missing.
Best Regards
Dennis
Great build so far, especially seeing you are going for out of the box! I wish I could build out of box, but you see I have a disease called photoetchadidous!
I feel like your chipping and wear so far is excellent, all except for that spot in the fighting compartment right next to the breech block. I really think it is to sudden and solid. you need more wear, and small scratches around it for transition, like you made in the other areas.
I have to agree with Dennis on the road wheels, a bit too big and deep.
I hate criticizing others work, but I love it when people critic mine, it has helped me become a better modeler. So please don't feel like we are bashing your work!
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