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Viginette Base
grimmo
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Queensland, Australia
Joined: January 17, 2006
KitMaker: 752 posts
Armorama: 569 posts
Posted: Thursday, October 06, 2011 - 08:40 PM UTC
Hello all! i have made a small base for a couple of modern marines, and i've got the feeling it isnt quite right. I't not really meant to be anywhere particular, just a wall, some grass and some ground. The grass is the new tamiya grass paste with some mud paste as well. I would appreciate any feed back!









Many thanks!
Babcat
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Michigan, United States
Joined: March 21, 2006
KitMaker: 269 posts
Armorama: 259 posts
Posted: Monday, October 24, 2011 - 02:05 PM UTC
Matt,

My feeling on it is... too flat... too sharp... Too flat doesn't mean that it needs to look like a mountain, but transitioning from one surface to another is rarely if ever that smooth. The too sharp just means that there needs to be more blending and variation of colors. The dirt road and mud should blend more (with the mud being in lower spots in the road) and the wall could use a wash and dry brush to take away the painted feel. That’s just my thinking on it, hope it helps!
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