Well i always say exactly as i feel about someones work (and i expect the same ofc)
You have a wonderfull idea there and did a marvelous job on the house but i think you have few major mistakes there.
Firts of all the pole, it hit the house and broke on 2 halfs (almost) . And still there is almost no damage to the roof of the house? a hit from a falling pole would definitely do some major damage on the roof tiles at least, that would couse exrta more junk on the ground.
secondly you have some sort of a "bush" or grass in the bottom of the pole, i dont think thats likely to be in the middle of a street. or at least if would be small grass.
Third, you have 5 large windows on the house, and still not a single (visible on pics at least) piece of the glass on the street.
Theese are all fixable things. You did a wonderfull job on some major details but the story need a bit of improvement.,
cheers and no hard feelings
Mirko