Overlall its an excellent dio. Well layed out, and a good story. Nothing pops out as being wrong or really out of place.
The figure painting is top notch ... great job on the splinter pattern. (The wounded comrade is one of Dragons best figure kits, IMO). Another highlight for me is the flag. The building, as well as setting the scene also doubles as a nice back drop.
The only real nit-picks I would have is all the corrugated metal, looking so new new and shiny and the obvious piece of Tamiya or Italeri brick wall, where the connecting bricks are perfect!