I made a Flash intro for my own site and I want some feedback on it.
I don`t have webspace (V3space is busy with clearing up their customerdatabase) So I asked Jim. Jim gave the intro a temporarily home on Armorama so many thanks goes to him

So it`s only a short time available on the internet please let me know what you think of it
Flash intro FAUST

Thanks in advance

k. nice as an idea but to slow for my opinion. and the star part it is too long take it a little shorter. but it really is nice

Vlady

That was something where I already thought of this was also the outcome of the conversation with Jim and Roadkill The tank driving start is a bit too long.
For the site there will be a slightly modificated version based on the feedback that I get here

Thanks for your comments

VERY NICE - CONGRAT

ROBERTO

l like it very much.

Patrick

Very nice Faust......the only thing I would change would be the length of the tank part...and maybe a bigger explosion when the rocket hits the tank....instead of going right into the name....have a bit of an explosion first....

Just my 1 cents.

Viper

I don`t think I put in an visible explosion at impact with the tank. It now has more drama.
No fire, No blood, No nothing And still everybody knows what happens

thanks for the comments anyway

Viper

I don`t think I put in an visible explosion at impact with the tank. It now has more drama.
No fire, No blood, No nothing And still everybody knows what happens

thanks for the comments anyway

How much of an explosion did Panzerfausts make anyway upon impact with a tank? Just curious. I think the intro is pretty neat.

Nic

hello faust
the intro looks real good as others have said the tank driving bit is a bit long.

I agree. Definitely shorten the tank advance. I kind of agree with Viper29. An explosion would add to it. But, I definitely like it the way it is. So I would say you have a winner either way. I look forward to seeing more of your site. Congratulations on a job well done so far.

Nice work!

Funny but the start is a bit slow

Faust,

A nice intro indeed !

I agree with those who say to speed it up a bit and I was a bit confused the last couple of seconds....too many changing cameras for this "Older Yougster" I'm afraid.

Good One Faust !! I'd love to see your site !!.

I still got some spare InternetSpace (not much just a couple of Megs). So if you want to show something for testing just let me know.

Thanks for all your comments guys

What I already thought that the beginning was too long. That will change as soon as the site is in the air

And Eagle thanks for offering Space for tests and try outs I will probably take advantage of that in the near future.

Thanks all

nice idea for the intro. just make sure there's a button to skip it for those who've seen it. What did you use to make the animation .I'm relatively illiteratewhen it comes to wrting code for the web.

Josh WEingarten
aKa shiryon

Shiryon

In the version that ends up as the version for the site there will be buttons
Thought of this too
The best way you can see this is a trailer For like a movie or something like that but then for my site